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Remembered Today:

April MGWAT


SFayers

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Hi folks,

If no one minds, (and as long as it hasn't been a topic before!), I'd like to suggest:

"Going to the Front!"

cheers

Steve

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I'll see what I can come up with...................

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Very good Landsturm I like the way the shadows of the soldiers convey the night time march to the front line.

Here's my effort for April- the thoughts of a soldier going up the line

Going to the Front

A distant rumble of fractured thunder,

Lightning flashes; hornet drones.

Our quiet world is torn asunder,

A quivering mass, we lurch along.

Human cargo, cramped conditions,

A crawl by train, to place unknown.

Hot miles marched over merciless pave.

To lay our heads beneath the stars.

Where once we who,marching proudly,

Through coloured streets and on open roads.

Now stride over dusty pathways,

To the broken world of monochrome.

Into narrow, twisted channels,

Our heads beneath the sight of men.

Wandering long and forlorn alleys,

How many shall not rise again ?

Above us whining, cracking, rattling,

A deadly metal, beaten zone.

Waits and watches, keeps a welcome,

For those unlucky, unaware, or slow.

"This far, my boys" and no further,

Left and right, make this your home.

"We'll hold this line" and work at nightfall,

'Til Relief tells us we can go......

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Superb as always.

susan.

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"......The poem could have been written to accompany the picture!...."

So it could...I never thought of it like that :)

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"....You're more of a genius than you thought you were!...."

I dunno, my wife always says I'm a reet smart A*** :o

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"....You're more of a genius than you thought you were!...."

I dunno, my wife always says I'm a reet smart A*** :o

All geniuses are, Spike. :lol:

Marina

What are the sheets for, Soren?

Marina

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Not sure if these chaps are going to or from the line but they look unhappy, so must be going to the line.

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All geniuses are, Spike. :lol:

Marina

What are the sheets for, Soren?

Marina

from what I understand they locked the traffic from the view from the Germans, meaning they had to shell it at random, I think.....

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Hi all

Just dropped in to see if my mate Kim (Ozzie) had got her writing juices flowing again - but alas - not yet!

Great images.

And especially liked this:

Where once we who,marching proudly,

Through coloured streets and on open roads.

Now stride over dusty pathways,

To the broken world of monochrome.

Cheers, Frev

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"....To the broken world of monochrome....."

I couldn't get anything to rhyme with sepia ;)

Creepy ..eh :rolleyes:

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Hi all

Just dropped in to see if my mate Kim (Ozzie) had got her writing juices flowing again - but alas - not yet!

Great images.

And especially liked this:

Where once we who,marching proudly,

Through coloured streets and on open roads.

Now stride over dusty pathways,

To the broken world of monochrome.

Cheers, Frev

The same stanza really caught my attention spike..excellent stuff.

Landsturm I really like this picture my favourite of yours so far.

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To be honest, the sentiment about a world of monochrome at the front,

I read in a memoir recently (can't recall which) and it stuck.

The rest just built itself up around that mental image....

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"....To the broken world of monochrome....."

I couldn't get anything to rhyme with sepia ;)

Creepy ..eh :rolleyes:

"Faded" is the more obvious but "broken" is much more appropriate for the Great War.

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Hi Landsturm

Dunno how to react, 6th... a reproduction of Francois Flameng's work

I drew this one when I was a kid, a few years ago :) , so do not have a clue whot I drew it from, it would have been some picture in one of the Great War books I had at the time.

Annette

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